Sunday, December 20, 2009

Love * PAUSE * Love ...

Before Five years :- ...
" now v both r in love n our heart s full of love , but later

when the situation changes v might fight n depart so ... "

she couldnt complete before that he kissed

her n told it ll never happen , v ll be the best lovers forever..

"every love starts like this n later waves of problems comes one after another

n at some point love breaks , so v must stick to a principle that is .. " again

interrupted with kisses ... ssshhh.. This ll take time , so the author ll explain what

s her principle or rule, meantime let them complete their romance ..

The rule s " when they get into a fight if someone says PAUSE they shud stop

everything n only when the person who says pause speaks first, the conversation

ll be continued "

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BEFORE 3 YEARS :-

HE = So what s ur pblm .. early morning u want to fight n spoil my day .

u r driving me nuts ... i dint put the dinner plate in basin yesterday .

ok whats in it .. i was tired like a bull n forgot .. is it a big pblm for

u .. u show no signs of what u were when v loved ...

SHE = *PAUSE *

HE = aaaaa [ as per rules he stops, his anger was running over his head , but

got to stick to the rule ]

SHE = [ she gasps for few mins n couldnt control ] come on what u r saying ?

i dont show love , Eh .. its who u ve changed , u treat me like a slave ,

wash the dry oily dishes one day then u ll know how diff it is. dont think

only u r struggling ... i'm double tired with office n housework .. still

u dont even want to move a single piece of stone ..and u say .

HE = * PAUSE *

( the conversation continued, even the PAUSE couldnt stop them )

HE = i dont ve the same love towards u anymore ...

SHE = i'm glad atlast u said the truth .. its a mutual feeling ..

HE = WTF ? u dont love me ..

[ they both got to closer n his anger could be seen over his throbbing forehead

pulsation ..] she sensed his anger n thought to say * PAUSE * but before that

he grabbed her like an animal n gave a kiss which she has never felt before, it was

the wildest thing she has felt ever , it was hurting n she wanted to say pause

but on the other hand she was also giving a pricking kiss which he

has never felt before ... since both their lips were working n none

of them could tell * pause * ..finally everything ended in bed . All their cat

fights where ending in bed ..

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PRESENT :-

He did the same thing, forgot to put his dinner plate in basin yesterday ..

HE = So what s ur pblm .. early morning u want to fight n spoil my day .

SHE = * PAUSE * [ then after few mins ] u think only i'm fighting each time

( it continued like everytime n bedroom door was waiting to be opened )

Now it has reached the Heat n soon its gonna happen ...

He grabbed her like an animal n at that time a THIRD VOICE entered the room

n said * PAUSE * n ran away .. They ve to stop everything bcos of their rule .

He sat over the sofa with perspiration n she went to kitchen n was emptying

tumbler after tumbler of water ... They both felt as if their nerves gonna burst..

.. slowly Their blood was washing away all the hormones ,

neurotransmitters from the periphery n the circulation got normalized.

The only thing they could do ( n the author too ) is to wait for their

3 yr old son to come back n speak ...

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The kid dint know anything about this n was happily playing *PAUSE *

game two streets away with another kid .


* THE PAUSE *

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

ithu 'Da Vinci Code' maathiri pala secretive truths ulla kathai maathiri therthu... Arun decodes...

U havent specified a name... so i've to imagine its U...
The before 5 yrs part is our first year of college..
The before 3 yrs part is our present yr in college... :D (nadakattum nadakattum... he he he)
The Present part of the story is ur imagination n dreaded truth n realisation...

Eppudi arun'oda mind usage ??

shiva... said...

@ nalla yosikirura .. naan neram pogama eluthuna thai .. da vinci code range ku compare pani namma natppa nee azhapaduthita ;) ..

I'm bloated with ur comment that i can write in cipher language ..;)

Anonymous said...

LOLZ!!!

*pause*

:P

Prats said...

i looooved ds !!!!! toooo awesome .. been long that i liked reading a story so much :D