Before Five years :- ...
" now v both r in love n our heart s full of love , but later
when the situation changes v might fight n depart so ... "
she couldnt complete before that he kissed
her n told it ll never happen , v ll be the best lovers forever..
"every love starts like this n later waves of problems comes one after another
n at some point love breaks , so v must stick to a principle that is .. " again
interrupted with kisses ... ssshhh.. This ll take time , so the author ll explain what
s her principle or rule, meantime let them complete their romance ..
The rule s " when they get into a fight if someone says PAUSE they shud stop
everything n only when the person who says pause speaks first, the conversation
ll be continued "
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
BEFORE 3 YEARS :-
HE = So what s ur pblm .. early morning u want to fight n spoil my day .
u r driving me nuts ... i dint put the dinner plate in basin yesterday .
ok whats in it .. i was tired like a bull n forgot .. is it a big pblm for
u .. u show no signs of what u were when v loved ...
SHE = *PAUSE *
HE = aaaaa [ as per rules he stops, his anger was running over his head , but
got to stick to the rule ]
SHE = [ she gasps for few mins n couldnt control ] come on what u r saying ?
i dont show love , Eh .. its who u ve changed , u treat me like a slave ,
wash the dry oily dishes one day then u ll know how diff it is. dont think
only u r struggling ... i'm double tired with office n housework .. still
u dont even want to move a single piece of stone ..and u say .
HE = * PAUSE *
( the conversation continued, even the PAUSE couldnt stop them )
HE = i dont ve the same love towards u anymore ...
SHE = i'm glad atlast u said the truth .. its a mutual feeling ..
HE = WTF ? u dont love me ..
[ they both got to closer n his anger could be seen over his throbbing forehead
pulsation ..] she sensed his anger n thought to say * PAUSE * but before that
he grabbed her like an animal n gave a kiss which she has never felt before, it was
the wildest thing she has felt ever , it was hurting n she wanted to say pause
but on the other hand she was also giving a pricking kiss which he
has never felt before ... since both their lips were working n none
of them could tell * pause * ..finally everything ended in bed . All their cat
fights where ending in bed ..
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
PRESENT :-
He did the same thing, forgot to put his dinner plate in basin yesterday ..
HE = So what s ur pblm .. early morning u want to fight n spoil my day .
SHE = * PAUSE * [ then after few mins ] u think only i'm fighting each time
( it continued like everytime n bedroom door was waiting to be opened )
Now it has reached the Heat n soon its gonna happen ...
He grabbed her like an animal n at that time a THIRD VOICE entered the room
n said * PAUSE * n ran away .. They ve to stop everything bcos of their rule .
He sat over the sofa with perspiration n she went to kitchen n was emptying
tumbler after tumbler of water ... They both felt as if their nerves gonna burst..
.. slowly Their blood was washing away all the hormones ,
neurotransmitters from the periphery n the circulation got normalized.
The only thing they could do ( n the author too ) is to wait for their
3 yr old son to come back n speak ...
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The kid dint know anything about this n was happily playing *PAUSE *
game two streets away with another kid .
* THE PAUSE *
Sunday, December 20, 2009
Love * PAUSE * Love ...
Posted by shiva... at 4:43 PM
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
4 comments:
ithu 'Da Vinci Code' maathiri pala secretive truths ulla kathai maathiri therthu... Arun decodes...
U havent specified a name... so i've to imagine its U...
The before 5 yrs part is our first year of college..
The before 3 yrs part is our present yr in college... :D (nadakattum nadakattum... he he he)
The Present part of the story is ur imagination n dreaded truth n realisation...
Eppudi arun'oda mind usage ??
@ nalla yosikirura .. naan neram pogama eluthuna thai .. da vinci code range ku compare pani namma natppa nee azhapaduthita ;) ..
I'm bloated with ur comment that i can write in cipher language ..;)
LOLZ!!!
*pause*
:P
i looooved ds !!!!! toooo awesome .. been long that i liked reading a story so much :D
Post a Comment